Here are the changes immagni posture that the BIG GUN STEFANO suggested to me, an interesting meeting in Trieste, some enlightening mail and decide to act first ... a "strike" under the walls of jigsaw to try to straighten the "situation" ...
... then a cut above the town but the left arm there is way more then that too ...
... the original draft at this point is a bit 'upset but now I like it.
Thanks Steph!
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Henry
